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PostSubject: Makhi's Jutsu   January 26th 2011, 6:01 am

Raidengan(Thunder & Lightning Eye) is a Dōjutsu Kekkei Genkai. It is only first unlocked under some stressful, emotional or Training condition after which the Raidengan may be used freely. The Raidengan has four stages the first is considered the awakening stage while the second the Mature stage. As the Raidengan evolves, the user gains heightened abilities. The levels up from the Mature stage is the Arashi Raidengan (Storm's Thunder & Lightning eye), which is gained by means other than training, and the Mashin Raidengan (Devil's Thunder&Lightning eye) which is forbidden among clan members, both of which are Special eyes and not evolutions. The Only level Above the Mashin and Arashi Raidengan is the Joukai Raidengan(Heaven's Thunder&lightning Eye), the Highest level of the Raidengan which is gained by fusing the Mashin and Arashi Raidengan in a user. The eyes drain little if no chakra at all the Mashin and Arashi use more chakra but nothing significant, the Joukai Raidengan uses a significant amount of chakra

2nd Stage Mature Raidengan: This stage allows the user to see chakra flow, able to see if someone is under genjutsu. This stage also allows the user to see almost anything at any speed they desire meaning that fast moving objects or people can be seen moving in slow motion allowing them to react faster, allowing the user to Copy D-A Rank Lightning jutsu with no problem at all, S-rank are only partially copied and need training(Half The training of Typical S-rank) When this stage is activated the Brain is heighten to an extent where speed of thought and reaction time are increased, it also allows the user to copy the speed of someone but if they are not used to the speed it drains their stamina. The eye also lets the user see the nerve connecting in a living creature and see the electrical flow through them allowing the user to predict the movements of someone.

Clan Weapons: The clan has access to a Special Metallic substance named Denki that rained down from meteorites which formed the mountains in the land of Lightning thousands of years ago. Denki is three times stronger than steel and half as light. Not only that but Denki allows the flow of Electricity better than any metal on earth as well as strengthens its power

The Most common thing Denki is used for is used for is to create A Special triple thick chakra string the clan's special chakra string which increases the speed and flow of lightning through it

Kunai Receiver: A Kunai made from the Denki material, its handle has antenna like spikes on its end and it has a seal wrapped around its handle, the Kunai receivers attract and seals lightning away that is five meters close to it, the kunais however only seal away a small quantity of lightning which usually means one or two of them only weaken some lightning attacks. The more Kunai that are in five meters of each other the greater the range and the greater the sealing potential.


Hiden Techniques: [Hiden (秘伝, Secret) Jutsu are passed down from generation to generation in certain regions or clans not kekkei Genkais.]

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PostSubject: Re: Makhi's Jutsu   January 26th 2011, 9:23 am

Sounds an awful lot like the Raikogan........ Neutral .....................

I'll just say this, although I'm not an admin or a mod, know that your 2nd stage mature Raidengan isn't going to be able to copy just any lightning technique, especially at genin rank....and people with KG specific lightning techniques will not be able to be copied at all....

Other than that....I can only leave if for the higher ups to look this over....

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PostSubject: Re: Makhi's Jutsu   January 26th 2011, 7:26 pm

So, it sounds like the Sharingan with a different name to me. But whatever, It's cool to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Makhi's Jutsu   January 26th 2011, 8:32 pm

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Name: Shinkei Gai Kata (Nerve Damage Style)
Rank: A
Type: Taijutsu
Style: Lightning
Description: Utilizing the Raidengan to see the nerves in an opponents body a style of combat is based on palm strikes and generally aims to damage the body's nerves. The user stores an electrical charge in his/her fingers and his/her palms and strikes the nerve connecting in the opponent confusing/disrupting the nerves of the body (Eg striking multiple times(like 13 times) of the arm the entire arm goes dull and limp for a short time ). After being hit several times with this style around the body the body's nerves will be totally confused making it hard to move due to the nervous system being disrupted. With a Strike the user can set off the nerve struck in the target's body making the brain think the area struck is in SEVERE PAIN. Due to the knowledge of this style the user is able to reveres paralysis in their own nerves(With red lightning Nerves are damaged to low degree and would need medical attention after words, with white lightning one strike affects an entire area on the body)

Ok...now that I looked at this a little closer, I have found a slight discrepency....My own jutsu, the Raikogan, that I spoke of before has the power to see lightning, and the nervous system and effect it, which it basically the first part of my clan's signature ability(ies). While I don't mind if you have an eye that allows you to control lightning, I'm a little uncomfortable with the fact that this ↑ above comes to match what my clan does.....almost exactly....

So...if you could please, I don't mind the eye and other stuff, but please remove that....what is quoted above....thank you...

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PostSubject: Re: Makhi's Jutsu   January 26th 2011, 11:19 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Makhi's Jutsu   January 27th 2011, 1:36 pm

I agree with Mahk-x. However I would like you to take down all of the "Ladder" moves. Meaning anything you cant do as a genin take them down and save them some place else on your computer. Also why are your jutsu list in spoliers? That means when someone is trying to see if they are legit(ME) I have to take out time to open them and if my compy is running slow that could take a way take those down as well.
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