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 Takara's Jutsu!

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PostSubject: Takara''s Jutsu!   May 24th 2009, 4:43 pm

Hitoshirenu: My Kekkei Genkai. It gives myself the ability to become completely invisible. It erases all traces of me. You can't see, hear, sense, or smell me at all, no matter what your abilities are. Sure, there are some disadvantages. It's gradual, and takes a few minutes to take full effect. Who cares though, it's really useful once I start using it.

Wood Element: I am very good at controlling wood element. That also means I can use water and earth attacks. They aren't really 'specific' attacks. Random blocks of wood can come out of the ground, and I bend them to my will. I can make weapons out of wood…just stuff like that. Water element is pretty simple. Water…attacks. Just the basics, nothing elaborate. Simple, but strong. Same goes for earth element.

Summoning: I can summon frogs. They don't really like me, and prefer not to obey me…but in the midst of battle, they come through. The biggest frog I can summon (as of now) is just slightly bigger than me. Any larger frogs refuse to come, no matter how much I try. Like I said, the frogs don't like me much for whatever reason…
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PostSubject: Re: Takara's Jutsu!   June 11th 2009, 1:10 pm

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Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night, and when you move, fall like a thunderbolt.


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PostSubject: Re: Takara's Jutsu!   June 11th 2009, 10:46 pm

Eh, the whole you can't sense me "no matter matter what your abilities are" seems a bit, misleading. Like, Xzystins's Chronogan can see people's Timelength and track it to the source. The only way to NOT have a Timelength is if you're...dead. Long story short, Xzystins will still be able to see you. I guess what I'm saying is unless you know what everybody elses abilities are, and what their weaknesses are, the whole "my ability works no matter what you do" is kinda cheap. That's like saying "My Brusselsprout Energy attack is omnipositional, so no matter what your abilities are, you will always get hit by it." Cheap. No?
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PostSubject: Re: Takara's Jutsu!   June 11th 2009, 10:57 pm

Ahem, my bad... I guess I misread that but that's why there are other higher ups to help no?

But yeah... Seeing, hearing, and smelling are okay in my opinion; however, having someone not able to sense you through any means is unfair. There are many ways to search for you.

There can be a disturbance in the wind, allowing a wind user to pick up where you are.

Earth users can tell where you're standing if they're competent.

Sound users can use an echo system like bats to pick where you are.

Or one I actually like is eye techniques.

Shen uses MRI to scan the entire area and I believe he'll be able to tell where you are.

Xzystins can use his Chronogan

I believe Rose has the Analytical Eye

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Someone can accidentally bump into you, as weird as it may sound it can possibly happen.

But those are a few things to consider, so toning that Kekkai Genkai would be nice. Otherwise that would be considering ghost RPing, in my opinion cause you're there but they don't know you're there and what not, once it has taken effect. Try to remove that concept of having no possible way to remove yourself from existence without killing yourself and stick with just the basic five senses, excluding taste... unless you want to of course, I'm talking about the werewolf in Walter xD, of sight, smell, touch, and hearing. Anyone else have any suggestions? My brain is currently friend from doing all these check ups and apparently I didn't do a good job on some of them.

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In raiding and plundering be like fire, in immovability like a mountain.
Let your plans be dark and impenetrable as night, and when you move, fall like a thunderbolt.


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PostSubject: Re: Takara's Jutsu!   June 11th 2009, 11:04 pm

Your right Domo.

Also, I would like to add something. Try not to say "No matter what your abilities are" If you can't back up how that is. Yes its your Kekkei genkai, but thats not enough reason, or explanation.
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PostSubject: Re: Takara's Jutsu!   June 11th 2009, 11:10 pm

I just want to get in on this but i can see your chakra network so yea. I'll be able to see you
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